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Title of my story:
Going to Rarotonga
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Orientation: Use keywords to explain
Where
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Rarotonga
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When
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Saturday the 4th of November
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What
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My cousins wedding
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Why
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To go and have a wedding
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Who
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My mum dad and myself
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These are the things I am writing about in the right order: (Use keywords only - you can add details when you write your story.)
Event 1
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First day we went to the beach and shopping around island and saturday morning market
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Event 2
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Second day same thing but drove around the island and check out cool places and barbeque
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Event 3
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Mum came to rarotonga
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Event 4
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Day of the wedding
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WALT write a recount.
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Start with your title below.
The Awesome Trip To Rarotonga
2 weeks ago I went to the glorious Rarotonga. We went there for my 1st cousin Tahuri’s and Karlita’s wedding we were there for 1 week and a half. We got their Friday night 10pm but we left 4pm Saturday cause Rarotonga is 25 hours behind. The area we stayed in was Titikaveka and in my dad’s friends house. My mum sadly decided to come a few days until Wednesday because my sister was very busy.
On our first day we went to the Saturday morning market I bought with my $70 dollars I got given by my kind parents and grandparents some shaved ice with pineapple strawberry and lime. My dad brought 2 sarongs all for himself I had to pay him if I wanted one watch I did I have to pay him $7.50 but I don’t regret I loved it.After a few hours we went to the beach I practised snorkeling for Wednesday. That was when we went to Captain Tama’s Lagoon Cruises when we went snorkeling. Eating kai and watch a coconut show how to husk,climb a tree and how to do different sarong models and it was boys and girls wow. On the day of the wedding we went to get braids for the wedding and we had a jam having a dance and their first dance was beautiful the song was called lady song everyone joined in.Then we went home in the next two days.But our last day we were packing and having a blast we left at 10pm and got home 2am.
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