Thursday, 1 December 2016

art moment in time

MY 8th birthday
P1 invited Kamiria to my house  for sleepover
P2 invited Mya to my  birthday in Auckland
P3 went to skytower
P4 went shopping
P5 went kellytaltons
P6 went rainbows end

I saw the  hole of Auckland at the top of the fear fall for like 1-2 minutes of seeing the whole of Auckland and then rushed down the FEAR FALL!
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I heard the wind (breezing) through me  it is so warm .

I wondered if Mya was having a lot of fun because I was having the fun of my life.


I felt very scared before I dropped I wanted to get off so badly I was so nervous when were but that was straight before I dropped when I finished I felt so brave I felt like I was the bravest girl in the world after I finished obviously.
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  1. Anonymous5 December 2016 at 09:35

    Well Done Rosa for a good plan of your story. One way you can make it better is to make sure you edit your story.

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